Wednesday, July 20, 2005

A lost deal..

All that you love, has been loved..
All that you hate, has been hated..

All that you love, has been hated..
All that you hate, has been loved..

All that you dream, has been dreamt..
All that you own, has been owned..

All that you lost, has been gained..
All that you gained, has been lost..

All that you have, has been had..
All that you gave, has been given..

All that you see, has been seen..
All that you say, has been said..

All that you think, has been thought..
All that you do, has been done..

All that you live, has been lived..

……..

All that needs to be won, has been won…
And you want to die, but you then are dead..

6 comments:

. : A : . said...

Like the way you twist it around here.

Ram said...

.:a:.,Thanks. Glad you liked it.

Sindhuja Parthasarathy said...

"All that you lost, has been gained..
All that you gained, has been lost.."

it is different from the message that the others convey,purposeful or otherwise?

thinkpad_84 said...

are u trying to say that there is no hope really? or is existence merely a speculation of future that turns to past even before one realizes so!

Ram said...

samudraa > not on purpose..i could sense that difference when writing.. but i let it go as i felt it was apt this way as well..

thinkpad > not really.. i thought my lines celebrate life in a way.. or do they not.. i guess it does not matter..

thanks for dropping bye. hope to see u again.

. : A : . said...

You're welcome!